The story was apparently written in two languages Nepali and Hindi (mostly with a Bihari touch). It could only be accepted as a entertainment or seemingly inspirational piece of work but could never be uploaded into the mainstream Nepali literary arena. If there were separate word processors available to check for language anamolies each processor would get confused at different points. The readers so far seem to be inspired by your story though. Way to go;thumps up to you. Rahulvai!