Galt - Thanks for getting back. "I make mistakes, I am opinionated, I write in a personal paradoxical state and post it without editing, but then it is merely an article, why should anyone take it so personally." I am with you there completely on that bit about taking it personally. The readers should not do that and neither should the writer when he or she gets feedback. Otherwise what's the point of having a conversation on Kurakani - you could post this in the blog section and get done with it. And you don't do that and instead provide people an opportunity to discuss what is in your stories. Kudos. It requires a certain level of existence to not take such things personally and I am glad to know you feel the way you do about it. And who doesn't make mistakes? I am quite glad you are opinionated coz I can completely relate to it :P he he We are all human and its good to see you admitting to those flaws instead of running away from it. "Some prefer being good critics some accidentally choose to be a prey; I am one of the latter." Confused there - you chose to be prey? Since you never tried to rummage the morale of this article, I shall save myself from answering it. Refer to the other posts if you need a clarification. As always, thanks for visiting. Oh actually I did. Or tried to :) I just didn't comment about it coz I dont care much for the moral of a story. One man's moral can be another man's sin. It is the content - the actual narrative - that is of primary interest to me and my commentary is based mostly off that. But this is not about me - it is your story and it is about you so let me stop my bak-bak :) I too tend to have opinions about too many things so hope you will take this in the right spirit. Thanks again for getting back. Good luck for any future pieces in the pipeline. Best wishes.