Posted by: lootekukur April 12, 2007
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I am glad you took it as a constructive criticism.
btw, i second lunatic. the piece certainly can be extended to a novel. i couldn't believe you told the whole story in 2 parts (hardly 4 pages? )..hmm..i like the terseness. good on you girl!