Posted by: Rythm April 5, 2007
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Captain, thanks a lot for taking time to read my story and commenting. :) I really appreciate it.
I realized tht the first sentence itself has a typo (dont know if others have it too). Please read it as "The cool wind froze her naked arms.....". not as " The cool wind GAVE froze...."
thanks