Dananah, Ha ha, thank you :) Sunnydev, Got you. Thanks. My bad. Being a novice in the area I did not conceptually grasp what you might have been refering to. If I understood your clarification correctly, then I guess I did try and be as honest as I could in characterizing the psyche / mental settings. The characters and events, for the most part, were all made up to give credence to that mental setting. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to clarify. You feedback has been fun to go through. A cleaned-up version of the story is also available at : - http://www.sajha.com/guild/read.cfm?guildid=396 Thanks again to everyone for reading a special thanks to those leaving feedback and comments.