ok ji, I read your story.Like the way u wrote.It's touching & interesting too.After reading all,this is my conclusion. -Om has come a long way!.He is a good example of how hard work,dedication and ambition as well as luck makes a man successful.It's admirable. -Feel sad for Manju.She loved a guy all her life who never even understood her even if they were togethe day & night.Who didn't even care to tell her that he is getting a marriage proposal even if they shared everything. -I feel Om cares for nothing but himself and only himself.When he was climbing stairs,he didn't even stop once to look back .And now after reaching almost at the top floor,he has started missing them.But why?Maybe he needs them now.It's all about him,only him. -How come he didn't know how she is doing now,whether she is married or not,happy or not.His and her love was different,it was never physical but more than that.Then why didn't he try to contact her or her family?(who treated him more than a son) to find about her.Atleast he should have contacted her dad who was behind his success,who was like a second dad to him.How can anybody stop caring about people like Ghanashyam Sir and his wife who had done so much for him?After all he was only a teacher!How much a teacher can make per month?Even then ,they let him stay in their house,fed him,treated like their own son.He was a man with big heart!Then if Om had so much respect for him,then why didn't he try to contact them to find about Ghanashyam sir and his wife if not Manju?We keep in touch with our loved once.I'm not talking about old flames but Ghana shyam sir was like him family,more than that at one point in his life. -Now after all this why is he still thinking of himself?Can't he think once for his wife and son?It's sad to know that his wife comes second to him .Looks like Manju was/is always first.Then before marrying Menaka why didn't he tell her he was in love with Manju.Atleast Menaka would have been aware of the fact .She would have decided accordingly.Atleast she would have known that Manju was in your life too.Was Om afraid she would reject him after knowing the truth. -Manju might be happy now.Time is the best healer.And maybe such a nice girl who only knows how to give has found a nice gentleman.Why is this story in public now without her knowledge?Don't u think that u r trying to purano ghau lai kotyaunu jasto!Why now? -Finally,I commented since u wanted comment from readers.No offense!U wrote excellent,It's interesting..But I am not happy with Om.I found him awasarbadi!