I was following the story but it was not completed. Somehow the discussion of this thread went on in one of the phone conversation with one of my friend. I tought it was an old hit, I didnt notice tht it was completed. Now I finished all at once. Well it took me more than 3 hrs as the story is touchy. I know the poverty and remote life. There are a lot of Oks passing through such life and if dice turns to their favor, they will become OK and of not they will become NOTOK living in poverty. A great story OK. If you have prologue, lets hear. Or write a prologue. People will love them.