Mercury, You are a very speedy reader. You wrote comments within an hour of my lengthy posts. Thanks for reading! Nikunj, What do you think about the reality? The adjectives "Attracted towards Sahariya keti", "Awasarbadi", "Money Minded", "Attracted towards rich family" are heartily accepted by Om in the title "Manju Malai Maaf Gara Hai" and in the first post "Mero Bhannu" although he was unware of everything. His biggest mistake was his respect to Ghansyam Sir's family. He has not regretted marrying Menuka but has regretted not getting Manju in his life. Om never wanted to go away from Manju. Om still loves Manju as much as Manju does to Om. Thank you for reading and commenting twice. Dada_giri, 1. You can describe in detail because you have traveled deep inside a female heart when you were somehow related with Loknath Kaka. 2. The extent of mistakes, in decreasing order, are by Om, Manju and Menuka. There was nothing wrong from Menuka. But after reading this story, she is feeling that she also was guilty. 3. "To love someone" and "to express love to someone" are two different things. In fact, if someone really loves, he or she never expresses. "Expression of love" was taken as "Uttaulo love" or "Superficial love" in the then Nepalese society. I think it is still the same. Birkhe Maila, Thank you. Would be great if you add your criticisms and comments. Chautari is always there and I am a silent reader. Galaab, Thank you. As I wrote at the beginning of yesterday's posts, the story substantially lacks the details and looks like unrealistic. I am sure once the details are complete, it wouldnot be as it seems now. Unfortunately, I have not got chance to read "Deuta". MustaineKoFAN, You are right, Om lost Manju and he is a loser (in different sense). However, he has not lost his way and is still traveling. Thannks for the comment. Anjeet, Here comes other adjectives for Om as "Selfish" and "Sold to rich family". That's fine. But the question is whether or not Om knows everything. It seems that he did all unknowingly and once he knew he regretted the most! What do you think? Thanks for the comment, Miss_me, Please write few words. I am sure you can write. Thank you. Aastha, Om has cried day and night since he knew he did a mistake :). Do you want to read Manju's letter in her handwriting? Om has preserved her letter and it is 8 pages long. I just summarized some parts of letter only. If so, contact me :) World_Map, Thank you for the comments. As I said to Gallab, the lack of details made the story as what you categorized as "Hindi Movie". As you all know my story was going nowhere due to its length when I tried to incorporate all details, I skipped a lot and it appears to be little unrealistic. If time permits, I will add more and preserve it for a reading to my son when he will be old enough to understand the story. hetterika!!, Hatterika! Although the comments were expected as I wrote: आज मैले सबै कथालाई एकैपटक पेष्ट गर्दैछु। कथा लामो भएपनि डिटेल्सहरु अझै अपूर्ण छन्) yesterday, I really felt that it would have been nice if I added more details. Thanks for the comments. Jimkg, Thank you. Would be nice if you write few more words indicating both pros and cons of the write-up. Bideshi, If you want to go through all these posts, it really takes a very long time. Alternatively, you can read during weekends. Thank you. -OK