no its not good, u need to improve in different sector Sector first that heart shape sign, now a days it su(ks. Sector second what those wings for are u flying now a days ? Sector third what is that yellow colour writing ? Yellow what does it mean ? yellow !!! hindu rituals need that colour of clothes when people die? did anyone really died ? Sector fourth What are those red things there man ? what are they doing there / why are they there ? Sector fifth What that green color is doing that ( kind of arrow ? Sector sixth, in the begining u said u did this for someone else, u r doing this for someone else, that mean you are playing with art, u r making it dirty. What i believe is that art should be made for urself, art should be abt what u think ? what u wanna say ? u potray there. Art should be for you, then only u can be a true artist. Art should help you to reveal urself, i.e. what i think. U need to improve big time.