sum_off, loved your piece as always. just a small suggestion, if i may call it, from a wellwisher. just have some more confidence in yourself. don't get bogged down by negative feedbacks...take them as challenges and try to prove them wrong in next stories. i know you know this better than anyone, but just a friendly reminder. you seem to have negative attitude towards negative comments. be a man and prove them wrong. if you quit, i will have to doubt in your "manhood" :P have a good one! LooTe