Wow ....what an ego!!!hold on buddy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I must say i am one of your biggest fan in sajah and has been ever since i read you.I have always praised your writings .Go read all my postings you i have posted so far!!!!! Ask people out here, I have always defended your ability of writing.Your Ego has slipped that level of respect(you cannot imagine) i had for you!! I even started comparing you to great writers like R.K Narayan and character generator Shyam Benegal.I am and was wrong .And you made me real upset.Thanks for the certificate..Now i know what kind of personality you have.I even said i will buy if you write professionally.. Just because i said can you explain this .You should not make such a big deal out of it. Hold that attitude my brother..it will take you nowhere.Sorry.Never going to comment on your story.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Restrain requires work..you are write but for one that you like wishing him for success does need boundaries..If you loved us ..u would have never said such things. Good luck ..for whatever your idea of perfect paragraph is!!i liked it as it was. Not to Disappoint other readers..i stop here. thanks for all the pleasure of reading you have given and i am sorry for your ego!!!!!