The story was indeed long.. but trust me as soon as i saw this thread i wanted to read it soo bad I couldn't even wait to go home... so i was multi tasking... reading ur piece as well as doing my work... took me about 2 hrs to finish... but was totally worth it...I think that the story was pretty simple but your writing skill made it really fascinating and enjoyable n everyone knows it.. including you... so just wanted to let u know that your story took me back to nepal and seriously that was quite a joy ride... at least 2 hours of mental break from my mundane work... “Smiling mischievously, Manoj whispered, “She was wearing a brown pair today.” I was virtually trying to draw that mischievious smile of Manoj... “Calm down. Don’t pull this Nana Patekar on me. You’re overacting.” ...LOL...Nana Patekar...i could totally comprehend the situation coz of that name.... Thanks for such a great story..keep it coming!!!