Posted by: ImI October 24, 2006
A THIN SLAB -- FINAL PART
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Well sum off ..no words ..as always: you know i read your story very carefully. I thought you mention something like : "The woman with a goiter was walking behind the kid. Manoj recognized the woman. He stared at the little girl and studied her face carefully. He recognized the girl too. Nostalgic, Manoj looked around for the little girl’s mother. She was not there. Manoj had not seen the mother since that ambulance incident 28 months ago. " Please Explain this >..i see something missing..Did u forget about this while patching all the holes?
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