Damn, wish I could watch such a beautiful girl fom my home's balcony here in Balaju. There ain't any good chicks in this place. A big thank you, sumoff for this piece of excellent writing. At first glance, it looked more than long for my reading. Yet, after reading the comments, as I went through the story, I could not help but go on and on reading until the very end only to discover that thiis mesmerizing story yet had a part of it to be published. Indeed, for an 18 year old boy, this more than reflects the awkwardness of growing up. The intricacy of the details and the subliminal emotions hidden behind every paragraph were so, so absorbing. Keep going sumoff!