BornInNewYork, No doubt it is a nice piece of writing. But, it is note the ultimate. There is room for editing. For example, read this section: Like the protagonist ........nowhere making him guess who could be his enemy ^^^^^^^^^^^ It should have been: who could his enemy be... By pointing this, I am not saying I can write better. He is an accomplished writer and a fine professor, I stand nowhere close. Namaste.