Jiradai Nepalayama re? tyo sifalbata orlera kalo pul tarna saath debre patti ajhai viut bech.chha? malai euta viut chaiyathyo ... tara bhaigo! baru tyo lampokhari bata utttar purba hannidai euta mangalbar chabel ganes jam hai ek fanko layera "deep" ko ud.dhar hos bhanne khabar ganes lai diyera tya chabel chowkma Bange ajhai ghumchha re tyaslai euti trikal sundari deeple khojya chha bhanne sunai dina milchha? huh? michha jiradai? la hai ma ta bhar parya chhu---marich dai le ta gati chhade khai kata ho kata... LeMon, please accept my appreciation for your interest in my writings. lfc123, I already rested. Don't you think the story ended at the right place? I could have added one more line but gave that freedom to the readers. Hurray, Chhyaka was just chhyaka. Any other name would not justify him. Madan was a character, wasn't he? Pundit, khai ta tarif matrai le bhayena ni----beram na chhaina? Oys bro, Oys bhanne bittikai tangal ganesh samjhinchhu khai kina ho...hamro palama tya ghumera dhyannga chhata ma hanne garya thyo saikal bata gairidhara tira ghurira ganesh lai hajiri dida... I thought I stopped at the right place. Like I wrote above, I could have written one more line to give the story a definitive end but I decided to let readers do that. Greater hadigau sammelan ta garnai parchha...ma ta ready chhu...atithi ganma jiradai ni rakhnuparchha...jiradai pani jhandai jhandai manartha hadigaule bhanda hunchha... dabalima bhet ghat garne kuro ramro ho tara kun chai dabali? limla kanchha ho pasal agadi (by the kisna mandir) ki bhate deuta (no, I am cursing---they used to make deutas out of bhat for a jatra) chheuko (in front of sarsoti than)? unclesam, Thank you for your encouraging words.