I have written this lyric.I don't know it is good/bad/worse. I need your help.Does this lyric deserve to be composed?You know for that I have to spend some money.Please,help. "I need a true friend in life" verse1: I want my love stay with me, even the world goes past me I choose my tears to comfort me, than all the rivers go past me verse2: Everyday is the hard day to spend, without a friend But never dies the hope at the end, when there is love to mend chorus: I need a true friend in life,to carry on With happiness and worry of the world to live on I need a true friend in life, who understands The forms of hearts, and the minds verse3: I build my dream and the shelter I share my love and the prayer Oh! my friend,hold my hand I take you over the sky,under the land repeat chorus: Bridge: I can live all my life for my love I can give everything I have for my love I know I will be broken in a failure Like a wrecked ship in the sea,without a sailor repeat chorus: