i am not a rapper or anything and i just came into this thread out of curiosity. I don't know anyone from this threead and am pretty new to this, so Kshitij01, marshall, and bathroom cofee i think your rap was not bad. But if i can be honest without offending anyone, i must say Jonny Blaze is quite advanced in his lyrics. (of course this maybe due to the fact he has probably been doing this a while judging from his rhymes whereas you guys are having some fun). Jonny's lyrics may seem profane and offensive, but upon closer inspection, his word usage of metaphors and multi-syllable rrhyming in an iambic pentameter sysytem is quite impressive, not too mention jonny used the same rhyme word for like 8 stanzas. In addition, it is quite funny and makes sense, very hard to do. Whoever you are, i hope you realize you have some major talent there. i hope i didn't say anything for you to put me in your next diss....ooops. "Ask her how firm my backhand is I smack the bittch and swing like Pete Sampras" *chuckle*