kshitiz, You never did mention about the two sections, I happen to think that rap was about, well, rapping, i.e. vocal section (oooh dumb me), thus I went on to listen to your work of art. And I did tell you what I felt about it, if I wouldve read your lyrics first, then maybe I wouldnt have said the same thing, yet I do stand by what I have said. I would rather read the first comment you wrote, so infuriated by the lack of appreciation to your great achievement, than reading your free-stylin that i can barely decipher. Second, just because you came first in something, doesnt mean I have to respect and bow down to that ..... there are different standards and criterion to judging, and I might not agree with all that. Third, Ive had this name for a while now, I wasnt trying to be original, or even win anything when I chose the name .... it couldve been anything else, beatles, gratefulDead, dylan, or even Dre for that matter, i just needed a name. Music and poems are something i thoroughly enjoy listening and reading to, it isnt something i claim to be any good at, so dont challenge me to it, for I, unlike yourself, am not number one in any website. You wanted people's opinion, and you received it, so dont go on with the notion of "khutta tanne", or did you only want the opinion if the opinion happened to be positive? You are a good writer, but why "bend" the rules of the language while writing, why not go along with it, try it, you might like it. Yet, I wish you luck in your quest for success in the hip-hop world....