Posted by: vantage point January 28, 2006
Elusive Danfe-Fiction-Sitara
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Sitara Sis..nice to see you back in Sajhaland. You have presented a very thorough and detail oriented writing. The picture of the setting can be easily visualized and the intense mood of the premise can be felt deep down while reading your piece. As always .. amazed by your fluency. "If only she could rip off the blindfold and memorize the face of her persecutor, she'd have the satisfaction of seeing her killer before her final moments. Not that it would do her any good." I admire her determination, bravery and hope - definitely hope for life and peace. "You have beautiful fingers, Mis Mina...like an artist's. Ah, but you are not one are you, you are a journalist---a journalist in search of a story." He stroked her spread hands with one rough finger. Her skin crawled at his touch but she resisted her impulse to react. Had the terrorists understood what lied behind the creative mind and the beautiful fingers that kept fighting for justice, we would never have lost our freedom and right. "A journalist, rash enough to get her precious fingers possibly smashed to useles pulp. You have come up with a very bold statement indeed! My innocent inner self is suffocating and screaming. It is screaming for freedom and peace all over the world. Eagerly waiting for your next episode, I remain.
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