शिरिषजी, माने यार! "एकादेशको स्वप्न महल, यथार्थको हाम्रो कुटिर आफ्नो बाटो बनाउन अरु आउनै पर्ने हाम्रो नजीर !" Yes I tried to go into a little bit different direction. But I still have to work on it. I think it looks more like poem than Ghazal now. The idea of recording or letting someone read aloud is great. My problem is that the friends who are near to me don't care about Ghazal. So it may be better for me to record and see.