good narration, dude. how can you remember such specifics? i personally can't recall that one specific moment when the light bulb went off. that thing about the sindoor was cool.... by the way, have you read "to kill a mockingbird?" it's harper lee's one and only book but its a masterpiece. when you read the book, you see things around you with the eye of young scout finch (who i believe is 8 or so). so there are elements of innocence and discovery, and a way of looking at the world which we all seem to have forget as we get older. you writing has some of that.