One who can die, remember what i posted right after your poem-post. I know someone wanted it to be removed and it is not there anymore, which is again not my site. so they can do what ever they want. but i had warned you and told you exactly what to expect if it was your first try here at sajha and you got it. Truth is bitter bhanya jasto I mentioned of a Vicious circle. Be patient and keep on trying and keep on posting, and the day you get better, these same folks lashing at you right now as the Gajal and poem emperors will bow to you. One important thing, when you post something and if people do not reply or post or comment, learn to take it as it is and ignore. Also if people do comment ignore it, too with a mind of "Same dukhe suke kritwa labha labhau jaya jayau" or remain calm at times of sorrow and happiness Similarly when you write, dont ask for comments or " tapailai kasto lagyo" stuff. Just write. when you write hoping people will like it and praise it, you wont be able to express your real self. my expereice. Dont expect anything from anyone. Remember , Karma gara fal ko aasha nagara. you will do great I know someone is going to request my post again be removed, but what the heck.