Posted by: shirish July 18, 2005
ASAD - shirish writes A Sher A Day
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" भन्ने नेपे र गर्ने नेपे दुई अलग मान्छेहरु हुन सक्तैनन् र ? कविहरुको जातै यस्तो होईन र, आफुलाई split गरेर अनेकौं मान्छे बनाउन सक्ने । " खै सक्कलीहरु split personality ka होलान् आफू त nakkali pariyo ! Split Personality ko chahi anubhav chaina ma sita. Ra tapai jastai tyo kabi lo level ma, ma pugula na-pula thaha chaina. You say I will write one sher a week, thats more than enough for you. But to a novice like me and who is trying to learn, needs more reading and writing. If I set a arbitary target of one sher a day, at least I will write one in two days or one in three days. Like I said in the beginning, its for my SELF ENCOURAGEMENT. Now your concern of quality, Well time will tell. I think I have made some progress since I jumped into this Ghazal stuff (and of course you helped me out for the rules). Its like learning to ride bike for me and I still have my training wheels attached so I need to practice everyday and I will do that more frequently. You have learnt riding and you can do that without your hands on the handle. and ...you have to understand that and encourge people like me positively. Regarding Beher: " Music-friendly meters को मेरो निष्कर्ष चैं मैले गरेको झारपाते अनुसन्धान (Ghazal and non-ghazal Hindi songs को एउटा सानो स्याम्पल हेरेर) बाट निकालेको हुँ । " पेशेवर गायकहरुले गाउने सम्भावना नभएका गजलहरुप्रति मेरो उत्साह कम छ । मेरो सोचाई के छ भने, यदि नगाईने हो भने यत्रोविधी रगत-पसिना बगाएर किन मिलाउनु प-यो बहर र काफिया ? Yeah your logic is equally true for chanda baddha kabita ! Madhav Ghimire used to say "छन्दमा नलेखेको कबिता पनि कबिता हुन्छ र?" (But now he has changed his stance,I was told) GURU you are talking apples and organges. Or rather, classical vs modern songs. Those ears tuned to classical music finds other variety pretty light..testai ta hola ni beher ra kafia milaya pachi aaunda ko majja. Is it necessary that all the ghazals need to be song ? You have written the answer: गालिब लगायत ठुल्ठुला शायरहरुको शायरीको सारै सानो अंश (अंश भन्नु भन्दा पनि संख्या भन्नु उचित होला अझ) मात्र पेशेवर गायकहरुले गाएका छन् । so its ok to write that can not be sung/sang (?) also !
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