abu 1whocandie4u ..... i aint really a poet... i just wanted to write the poem and make you feel that your talent aint being neglected..... if i hadnt read you poem, i wouldnt even have been able to write those 8 lines i wrote.... thank you so much for the poetic environment that you created... and i had a great time writing that poem of mine..... made me think for a while.... aint trying to be rude... but i like my poem because i wrote it;)....... its not for other people to look at and judge... coz hell, i atleast tried.... that was just a way to say that you do have the talent to turn a non-poetic guy to a poet for 10 mins (yup.. it took me a long time for that small poem of mine;) pc out