OneWhoCanDie, You asked for a comment, I gave you a sincere one. You do not like it that is your problem. Generally, people do not like comments on their first poem where they spelled their heart out. You went through this emotional orgasm. You know the face behind each word. You know the deception behind each ser. For me, they are mere words and as they do not spark any emotion on me, they failed to deliver. Don?t hope your Padhya Kabita aka Gazal to be become the National Poem of Nepal unless you are Paras Shaha. It is not happening anytime soon. People write for decades with out any name recognition and here you are already chomping. I tell you to read because you are writing in Bhanu Bhaktiya style which is history and literature does not go on cycle unlike you daddy?s bell bottom and it is not coming back any time soon. Your Ashesh Malla ? He is more of a drama writer than a poet. Saru Bhakta - I have read him and he writes well. Your Bal Awara ? still does not ring a bell. Non of them are poets of much significance, Saru bhakta could be, from the perspective of surviving in Nepalese Poetry after fifty years.