>>Houston Please base your critique, be it positive or negative, on some concrete reasons so that the writer can at least utilize it constructively. Seems like you are more acquainted with the history of Nepalese poems and all, and you might have been correct when you said that 1whocandie4u's poetry is still in its infancy but what good would it do to him if you don't give any reasons why his poems couldn't live up to your expectations. Was it the use of his words which was premature? Was it the lack of depth in his poem ? If so, give some examples yourselves or leave him with a pointer to a good piece of literature. Don't just say : "I am f**king more experienced than you are and you are worth a calcutta cow . period. "