Thank u for chakman and houston for their sicere comments but i have some comments and queries related to houston comments.How can u tell me that I am in the state of infancy?Yes, you are riight and I am but try to justify.I really do not know what exactly poem means to u but for me any short piece of writing conveying some message will be poem.........I do not know history of Nepali poem but that does not mean that any person who does not know history and has not read bhanubhakta and motiram can not write it...............I must thank for the link but u sound as if u are master of Nepali poem.you must not have any illusion that only poems who are in gadhya or chhanda only will be poem.Read the Poems of "Bal Awara" and Sarubhakta.and you will know...................That my poem was in fact an attempt to write a gazal.........................................................Houston do u know what is Gazal? I hope you will reply it .and thank u 4 ur comments