Houston, your repetition were alone that kept me riveted to your stories. A much different genre than most of the writers in this forum write. I am not good at giving positive feedbacks, but here, I ACTUALLY READ THE WHOLE THING and thought, THAT WAS AWSOME! Contrast to what the greatcritic of our times, RYTHM THINKS! yah, at least better than samrat's ramblings houston :) bravo! and yah, i didn't need a supplementary dictionary to go with your writings..or did i?