Hey houston... I did not have time to read this so d in comment earlier!! I think that your story is nice. Truthfully I had never read something like this in sajha. I did read people grumbling abt their ex, or writing of their moments in love... but never abt how other ppl fantacized abt your gal and stuff. It is really unique and i enjoyed reading it. It had a different soul and heart to the story. One thing though.. i hope u dun mind me saying...that there were times when u repeated some thing over and again.. and i think that your repetation got a bit too much at a certain point. Tara as a whole really enjoyed it. Keep writing.