kasto timing yaar! we posted at the same time...rrrrrr.....that's kind of frustrating! anyway, i take back my sarcastic comment and commend you on this last poem of yours. it's oh so deep and profound! (;-D) okay, what can i come up with..... tyattikai basnuparchha dinbharee ghumna pani napaine office ko waripari sadhai kampyutar chalaune malai ta paagal banaune alikati freedom chahinchha ni 5 o'clock phursat painchha ki? mitho bhayeko lunch khaye tara badarni bina, ma ta eklai bhaye monkey girl ko maya malai kina lagne eh, badarni, jaam na! ma sanga bhagne! (;-D) kata gayo, nyc ko poonte dai yo thread maa nabhayeko usko lekhai ani bedrock bro pani harayo tara hushpuppy le kati karaayo! indi dai pani luknubhayo namitho raksi khayera thukna gayo.... aba ta malai aru kura na aaune sabai le bad poetry lekhnu na, prize ta paune!