wow- y'all were busy last night! thanks everyone for contributing! prem charo ko kati ramro chha ni! but the title of this thread is "BAD" poetry and, frankly, some of you are too good....tara, ho ta, meera, you are, without a doubt, the winner! prize pauna laai, st louis chhodera ny tira aau na! hmmmm....okay, here we go.... terai maa ghumda, piye lassi dashain maa khaye, mitho khasi tihar maa laxmi laai puja garay amrika aaunda maya ta maray bhai tika maa phul haru bokay amrika maa basda, yo chalan rokay ahile wahaako yaad sadhai aaune chha ma ta kahile pharkana paune chha? ma chahi euta palpali keta ho tara pani seto bhayeko chhala mero (;-D)