new user, I was one of those who commented against you, but did present myself positive on some of your good point as well. your narration on nepali & english is very good, not very good .... great. & story is KHATARA keep it up. Nepali ma lekhna try gareko, key board ma letter khojda khojda hairan, feri english mai type gare. CHADAI CHADI JAWAS BARU..........