Posted by: IndisGuise March 18, 2005
LOVE:Unspoken
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fever!!laa hey bhagwan k bhayo timilai?!dhami bolaunu jam...ramro dhami ako cha re pallo gau ma:P ..timilai sachikai fever bhako ho bhane may be due to cold hola.tato tato luga lagaunu ,soup khanu nii yasto jado ma pani muscle dekhayera hero bannu parcha katti samjhaunu chiso lagcha bhanera:Ptake care and get well soon. Hahaha, Ruina tweets, perhaps muscles dekhayera nai hola :( .. Darn it was bad. Anyways m almost aiight ;), courtesy @ your prathana (pakkai garyo hola ni :P) & your "what to do when you have ....101". Anyways, wassup. Miched meh ?? :P LOL. Ok, don't even say, I know. ( Re Kya ;)) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nirman bro, Nayt, but thanks. ( Editor ko offer ko barema) And regarding "maile dahaa garne arule maan parayo bhanera", let me make it clear. I also like your writing. I have expressed it numerous tyams. If you'd like to hear it again, here it is. You writing i.e this story is awesome. I mean it. :) I was merely expressing that this phrase "For that smile of hers, I would have killed anybody " was a lil cheesy, in otherwise intese, spellbinding story. Of your hundreds of phrases in your charming story, I pointed at one line, but am sorry, my bad. From now on, I'd make sure to express only "tariff". Sorry. As a regular reader from my many praises, you only saw a small opinion, expressed solely for the sake of it, without any "dahaa", irsiya or otherwise. And yeah, Enjoyed your double doses. I am waiting in anticipation of a intese climax. Pardon my audacity for I have a gut feeling that the ending will a bitter sweet. Let me leave at that. ( Make no mistake, "feri wahh mero story ma timile climax guess garne.. blah blha bhanla, It is the quality & serenity of the story that has made me think about it even after I am done reading it. Feri artha ko anartha niklela. Aru ke bhanau hajurlai. Namaskar :). ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Ardent bro & Sristi, hehe, nice going. Joke bhanda bhanda dil ma "poke" gardeu ki kya ho Ardent bro. LOL. Aiight laterz, In jest, IndisGuise:)
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