Posted by: testdirector March 4, 2005
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Anj, You could probably sell it to some singers... you write as if your mother tongue was English and you had been writing for decades. So simple and so fluent without a glitch. Yesto po poem! Think of publishing some more for us, will you? Some other topics, maybe next time (I'm tired of love stories). I'm assuming the letters are yours. If you have some 20 of them, maybe you could send them to press. Some award will be there for you. Although I enjoyed every sentence there, I think some of the stanzas could be merged together to make it a little shorter and bear more impact. Just $0.02, but still tremendously lyrical.
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