Posted by: SITARA January 20, 2005
FOOTPRINTS!...sitara
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Thanks friends for stopping by on this wintry day. Oi Kalanki! VA coming and sutukka going? Send me a greater snow storm so I can have snow days. Jagalteyji: Satya ghatna ma adharit tara still haunts me. Pink Floyed: Cinquain hmmm... I went back and counted the lines. :) You are very observant and thank you for your comments. I take them as constructive critique. I used to write in rhymes and sonnets but such limited my depiction of imagery. Now free-style allows me unlimitted leeway. Ashley, my sweet: Thank you! I only wish you would start writing in Sajha again. Your writing brings the youthfulness and vigor that sajha needs. Confused and Uday; Sitara never lost her groove, she just doesn't dance to others' tunes. But thank you for reading. Isolated F ji: La la, anecdotes lekhu la... hamro poetry ma political dum chaina ni! ;) But I thought you looked for symbolicism ... try that in mine too... :) Nepe and Gokul ji... oho! Ma ta dhanya... those footprints don't match my Yama raj's. He was wearing "khadaoo" . :P Oysa, lau na la... you still in VA? how about another memory lane? Waiting for another storm so I have a week off! Indi le jiskaoonupayeta... Aphno dhoti on fire thaha chaina... what is burning bhancha! :P Dada giri, I have been reading your beautiful Nepali with envy... kaash. Yespali ta bombastic Nepali words (nepe ji ko) ultha garna... Nepali to English to Nepali dicationary bokeko chu. PresidentofNepali ji: mero darshan... Marera hunna hajur, president, Baanchera bhachayera matra. Tara hajur ko tyo kabita chahin sarai tragic lagyo. DWI: Really, you don't like poetry? But you do a great job with haiku ni. Still remember naming you "Drunk While Inscribing!" ;) Jira and TMA; Hami lekhdai garamla... you guys keep writing too pls. What is a world without words? TMA: Yes, I will send you some snow flakes; save them if you can, in the memories of a beautiful winter. Beauty hath its destructions though... ;)
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