hey sitara i have read some of ur stuff and its really good, it is more visual i would say. However, actually confusing in some aspects. Well my point is, having read some of your old stuff, i find that your writings are free verse oriented and then again this one fits perfectly as a pot of clay in a mould as a cinquain. i'm not criticizing u here at any point. It is just that actual free verse writers almost never write arcostic poetry or cinquain.this is just out of curiousity. nothing offensive, no harm or trying to belittle u in any way.