Posted by: crazy_love May 21, 2021
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Hi AnandNepal,
I just listened to the video, recorded version of my story, part -1. You must have worked really hard. It was nice to listen to my own writing in some other person's voice. But, you have added some sentences of yours. Alia Bhatta is pretty but she was not mentioned in my story. I think it would be nice if you have just left those without any new sentences. How much time do u invest to make one video? It must be time-consuming. Anyway, nice job! Sorry, I cannot give permission to make more videos.
But, you can make videos of your story. I would love to listen to those.
Part -2 is going nice too. I like reading it. I was surprised when you write "10 kg ko chhati". In my imagination, 5 kg each, 1kg=2.2 lbs, 2.2x 5= 11.0lbs. Wow! she must be rich. In some other para, the narration was like 1-2kg ko "stana". I thought she reduced her breast size by dieting or cosmetic surgery. Jokes apart, keep writing!
Best regards,
CL
I just listened to the video, recorded version of my story, part -1. You must have worked really hard. It was nice to listen to my own writing in some other person's voice. But, you have added some sentences of yours. Alia Bhatta is pretty but she was not mentioned in my story. I think it would be nice if you have just left those without any new sentences. How much time do u invest to make one video? It must be time-consuming. Anyway, nice job! Sorry, I cannot give permission to make more videos.
But, you can make videos of your story. I would love to listen to those.
Part -2 is going nice too. I like reading it. I was surprised when you write "10 kg ko chhati". In my imagination, 5 kg each, 1kg=2.2 lbs, 2.2x 5= 11.0lbs. Wow! she must be rich. In some other para, the narration was like 1-2kg ko "stana". I thought she reduced her breast size by dieting or cosmetic surgery. Jokes apart, keep writing!
Best regards,
CL