Sitara, I am hopeless when it comes to understanding poems. So I can't really comment on this poem. But I saw this, and just wanted to CONGRATULATE you on your admission to such a prestigious writing program. I wish you all the best; and may we hear more and more from you (poems, stories, memoirs, essays and so on) in coming years. It's always great to see fellow Sajha people doing well and better. Congratulations!! oohi ashu