Well done.. I watched it all the way, and thoroughly enjoyed it!

To make these videos a little more 'engaging', I'd add a few clips with interactions to others; perhaps some random people you came across on your way, or even your friends that you spent time with en route to the destination (of course with their consent!). Switching between narration and live audio actually helps engage the audience better.

I hope to see more of your adventure/travel videos in the future.

~@~