Thank you ujl for the comments. Since this is my first approach on creating cinematic video, I really need to step up my game on color correction and exposure. I was having hard time with my exposure settings but I'm working on getting better next time.
I do realize that I could have done better with the sharpness on the footage but again I was using Final Cut Pro for the first time for editing and I still need to understand proper settings for exporting the final work.
You are absolutely correct about creating a theme to attract more viewers on you tube. I will definitely keep that in mind.

Also please check out my new video on separate post. Thank you.