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 काठमाण्डू
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काठमाण्डू
By: Simple_KeTa

अंधेरो कोठा, उत्तेजक संगित,  चुरोटको धुंवा
कामुक तरुनि , रक्सिको गिलास
मात्तेको मान्छे

छातिको पिडा ,  रक्त रंजित, भाँचेको खुट्टा
भावुक मारुनि, युद्द विराम
आँत्तेको मान्छे

गाडिको धुंवा, हावा दुशित,  खाँदेको डब्बा
चालक बेहोसि,  नमिलेको हिसाब
भागेको मान्छे

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haiku लेख्ने प्रयास ।
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Last edited: 04-Sep-10 08:57 PM

 
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गजब छ है।। अजै जहोस् त।।।
 
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माफ गर्नु होला तर यो कुनै पनि हाइकु बनेको छैन , ५-७-५ हुन पर्ने हाइकुको नियम हो नि हैन र .... अब भन्नु होला २०१०को धागोमा शब्द खर्च गर्यो तर साझालाइ पुरानो रचनाले भर्न दुस्साहस गरेको मात्र हुँ .

- थाहा छैन
 
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हाइकु भयो भएन थाहा छैन तर आधुनीक कबिता चै भयो कि ?
 


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