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Posted on 03-07-16 1:28 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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दुवै मिली चुडांइदिए तिनैलाई जोड्ने पूल थिएॅ
कांडा सोचें छन् कि कुन्नी म त केवल फूल थिएॅ।

भन्ने थिए होलान् सब्ले कति सुन्दर उपहार यो
उपहार नी फाल्छ कोही, धत् म त भूल थिएॅ।

पाएं आज आफैंलाई रेटि काटी फालिएको
उन्कै पेटमा हिजो सम्म, म कति प्रफुल्ल थिएं।

गरिन बिन्ती बचाऊ भन्दै यस्ता निर्लज सामु
तिन्लाई के’था म त तिन्कै प्रेमको मूल थिएँ।

सोच्दैछु म आज यहाँ जे भयो ठिकै भयो
बाँचे पनि म आखिर आंखाकै धूल थिएँ।


 
Posted on 03-07-16 8:22 AM     [Snapshot: 69]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Kata haraunu vo vaneko ta balla dekhna paaiyo. Arko damdar ra marmik prashtuti. Keep them coming.
 
Posted on 03-07-16 11:19 AM     [Snapshot: 125]     Reply [Subscribe]
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मृगतृष्णा ज्यु ,

मिठो र शसक्त बिषयको उठान गर्नु भयो गजलको माध्यम बाट तर तेश्रो शेर चै "शेर" भएन शायद . अलिकति मिलेन गजलको नियम अनुसार जस्तो लाग्यो , काफिया मिलेन नि हैन र . अन्य शब्द जस्तै :
शूल
तूल
कूल
हूल
प्रयोग गरेर केहि बनाउन पो सकिन्छा कि ?

अल्पज्ञानी छु , अन्यथा नलिनु होला .

- थाहा छैन
Last edited: 07-Mar-16 11:20 AM

 
Posted on 03-07-16 6:25 PM     [Snapshot: 225]     Reply [Subscribe]
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आमा बाउ को !!

 
Posted on 03-08-16 1:24 AM     [Snapshot: 306]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Altijdgoede ज्यु: Thank you so much. I will try my best to post further too. and yes ! नहराउने कोशिश गर्नेछु |

Thanchaena ज्यु: अन्यथा लिन थालियो भने त अगाडी बढ्ने कसरी? होइन त!

Instragram ज्यु: खै? बाउ आम को हो थाहै नपाई चुडिएको एउटा फूल|

पढिदिनु हुने सबै मा आभार.
 


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