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 सारंगी रेटे धून बग्छ, मुटु रेटे खून .................
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सारंगी रेटे धून बग्छ, मुटु रेटे खून
जो भेटे नि रेटे मात्र, छर्दै भोटे नून

मसी जाच्ने कसी खोज्दै छु अचेल
छापावालमा पनि भेटियो खोटे सून

ज्ञान बालेर हेरें, अँध्यारो नै रह्यो
कहिले काहीं झुल्कँदो हो राते जून

बैंशलाई कति पल्ट बेच्छौ बजारमा ?
पुग्यो अब नमार्नु है, हे माते, भ्रुण

सारंगी रेटे धून बग्छ, मुटु रेटे खून
जो भेटे नि रेटे मात्र, छर्दै भोटे नून
 
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yo line sabse man paryo

सारंगी रेटे धून बग्छ, मुटु रेटे खून
जो भेटे नि रेटे मात्र, छर्दै भोटे नून

ani last line

gajjab thuldaai
 
Posted on 06-12-14 12:56 PM     [Snapshot: 123]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Beautiful...daami cha.


 
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dai ko gazal padna jati mazaa cha teti aru ma payinna....khuun dekhi noon samma ra suun dekhi juun samma ko sabai britanta yee kehi haraf bhitrai nai aatainasakunu xaa....wariii-parii,yetaa-utaa ,jataa--tetaii,
 
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लहरे ( सेरिअल) , पिया ( स्प्रिंग)  र अलियास प्रति  हार्दिक आभार | 

केही मित्रहरुले भोटेनुन शब्द प्रति आशंका ब्यक्त गर्नु भए छ | हामी सानो छंदा ढिके नून कै प्रयोग हुन्थ्यो र त्यसलाई भोटे नून भनिन्थ्यो | 

यसको प्रामानिकता जाच्न मैले नेपाल प्रज्ञा प्रतिष्ठानबाट प्रकाशित बृहत नेपाली शब्दकोश पलाताएर हेरें | तपाईंहरु पनि हेर्नुस , मेरो बुझाइ सही रहेछ | 


 
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घच्हीको लग्यो है ठुल्दाई /

सहि हो ठुल्दाई, जोसले भेटे नि रेटेको मात्रै छन् भन्या , खोइ छुयाउ, छुयाउ का /

सखारैमा सुन्दर कविताबाट दिन सुरु भयो, आज चै केहि होला जस्तो छ है / जागिर देवले सायद जागिर देला कि आज त / छिटै अर्को पनि औला कि भन्ने हाम्लाई लैरछ ठुल्दाई /
 
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Nice work Brother.... I am aware of the term "भोटे नून" and "खोटे सून". My grand-parents used to make reference to it most of time. How did you end up referring to "राते जून"; I don't know if this is coincidence but today (Friday the 13th of June 2014) we will see a full red moon called "honeymoon". Due to it's color, the moon might appear very near to the earth.
You must be a astronomer or Physics major or a Jotise Pandit baje or could be just a Science freak like me.
Here is the link: http://news.nationalgeographic.com/news/2014/06/140612-full-moon-friday-thirteenth-honeymoon-science-space/
 
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धन्यबाद कर्णाली ब्रो,
त्यै त जो भेटे नि रेटेर जाने भन्या ....

Ruben123,
धन्यबाद | मेरो लेखाइ को आशय , यो अन्ध्यारिएको जिन्दगीमा कहिलेकाहीं रातमा जुन झुल्के सरी केही त उज्यालो आए हुन्थ्यो भन्ने मात्र हो | आज शुक्रबारे पूर्णे को हेक्का थिएन | न त पण्डित हुँ, न ज्योतिष न भौतिकशास्त्रमा बिद्यार्थी | बिज्ञानको बिद्यार्थी चाहिं हु नै | अझ भनुं ज्ञानको बिद्यार्थी |
 
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Khhon word ali non nepali lagyo. Probably ktm ma brought up vayera hola. Nepali dictionary hindi justo vast nabhaya pani yesto poem haroo bishudha nepali word le bhareko bhaya gold ma aroma hunthiyo ki bhanne hamilai lageko chha. But I like it....
 
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good one !!

बास्तबमा rahulvai दाईका सबै रचनाहरु गहिरा भावले भरिपुर्ण हुन्छन |
 
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वाह, वाह, !!!! अति उत्तम. अरू पनि जावॊश.
 


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