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Posted on 03-05-12 8:34 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ए बा - म आज मातिएर घर ढिलो फर्केको छु,
किन ढिलो भनि हप्काउनुस्न |
ए आमा - म अल्छि गरि खाना नखाई कम्प्युटरमा झुंडीराछु,
आँखा बिग्रेला धेरै नहेर, उठेर खाना खा भन्नुसन |
ए दिदि - मेरो कोठा सारै फोहोर भाको छ, लुगा नधोको धेरै भो,
भाइले कोठा सफा गरेन भनेर ममीलाइ कुरा लाइदेन |
 ए बहिनि - म इन्जिनिअर् बन्न लागिसके,
तेरो म्याथको होमवोर्क मलाई आउछ, सोध्न |
ए भाई - मैले नया मोबाइल किन्या छु,
मलाई नसोधी तेरो थोत्रो छोडेर मेरो नया लैजान |
ए दाइ - म गाडी चढ्ने भैसके, 
तै नि मलाई तेरै बाईक चढ्नु छ, एकछिन साचो देन |
ए साथी - मेरो त यो पाली नि tragedy पर्यो यार,
पार्टी दे न त भनेर मेरो बिल्ला उडान |

missing those moments ...


 
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 peom not sure touching absolutely 
 
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:(
miss those days . as somome says. kaas tyo pal pharkera aaune bhaye.
 
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Very well put. A different twist to Amaile Sodhlin ni.
 
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Thank you adventurer, facebook, hyolmopa and stiffler for the inputs and also thanks to all the silent readers.
 
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@kanchho bhai: no need to label this thing as kabota, katha, nibandha, or so. Art is a form of expression and you've expressed yourself beautifully.
 
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