evening sky

the lone jet shines
higher than the cresent moon.
they must be going far...

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mG.

MG,
superb as always. Your ability to paint a vivid story with such simple and terse wordings are amazing. Hope all's going with your stories and those middle lines :). Please do share more!

PS. The pattern of global warming suggests that it might not be far fetched to say that it snows in adeleide :)

mG - Lavishly written! Thanks for sharing.

Flawless! MG, you are very talented - hope we get to read more.

:)

if a dinner and movie is a date you find, thats rare
look in ur hi5 " top 6 friends"; you will find one there
can't think of anything other reason why man would do
they are so much trouble when standing next to you

Sure you have good intentions. But I forgot to mention. All your charity is clouding up my clarity. Sounds like good advice but This is not your life and All your sincerity isn't really helping me .Don't catch me I'm not falling.Don't pick me up cause I'm not crawling
I'll put the pieces together. Can't turn a rock to a feather.Please just let me be
But don't give up on me. Not saying that you're not clever.Trying to make it all better
I'm saying once again please Don't give up on me

Here's the situation Thanks for your participation But I gotta figure out What I want to be about May be no consolation Imagine my frustration You're looking at the screen
But I'm the one in who's in the scene Don't jump in I'm not drowningIt ain't as bad as it is sounding. I'll put the pieces together Can't turn a rock to a feather Please just let me be
But don't give up on me Not saying that you're not clever Trying to make it all better I'm saying once again please Don't give up on

BUT STILL HAVEN'T FOUND WHAT I 'M LOOKIN FOR