[Show all top banners]

soktim
Replies to this thread:

More by soktim
What people are reading
Subscribers
:: Subscribe
Back to: Kurakani General Refresh page to view new replies
 Stories in Sajha

[Please view other pages to see the rest of the postings. Total posts: 28]
PAGE: <<  1 2  
[VIEWED 11241 TIMES]
SAVE! for ease of future access.
The postings in this thread span 2 pages, View Last 20 replies.
Posted on 04-29-07 2:55 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?    
 

I want to read some good stories. Please recommend some unforgetful stories that you have read in past or recently in Sajha .
 
Posted on 05-04-07 2:41 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?    
 

I don't read much of stories in Sajha. So far I have read these writers:
Sum_Off, John_Galt, Sajhagazer. I should be reading Amber's too sometime.

The most memorable one by far has to be A Cold Jacket - by Sum_Off. That one instantly reminded me of The Last Leaf by O. Henry. I think Sum_Off has a pretty good plot laid out before he sets off with his writing. The message I got off of the story was; the same jacket that was merely a coveted celebrity-like outfit among the youth could serve a better purpose of saving the previous life of a less-privileged human being. And that was touching!

John Galt and Sajhagazer have probably the best flow in their writings out of the few writers I have read of. These guys handles seemingly negative feedbacks in such a welcoming manner and each of the two strive to deal with them with great reasonings. Feedbacks from so many readers will only improve your writing skills. If I were you I would keep that in mind.

In general, I prefer stories with moral or progressive messages. As a suggestion to the writers who are entertaining a good segment of the Sajha folks, in my opinion if they can wait till Friday afternnoon or later to post the new stories, that would most likely jack-up the readership. After all, when is a better time to read leisurely than during the weekends. The writers in turn would get a more organized and complete feedbacks. Just a thought.

All,
have a nice weekend. :)
 
Posted on 05-04-07 2:43 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?    
 

previous=precious*
 
Posted on 05-04-07 3:10 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?    
 

flip flop haha what a nice joinder to sitara's bata chappal vignette, but thanks to both of you such sweet compliments that I feel like I am being born as the illegitimate son of Halwai Panna lal, plop in the cauldron of gulab jamun

But to return to those tykes, at the field claimed by the throbbing pulse of puberty, which oddly rested by the boy hood innocence that in the crisp morning of the valley, right after the dharmic karyakram finished and kids of all shapes and sizes jostled to line up to receive pristine bottles of nepal dairy...came a sing song voice above it all, "nilocon nilocon...." as the oblivious tyke, with out a penny in his pocket to sit in the milk line, sauntered by the street, hands in his pockets singing about a ctachy tune that advertised prophylactics on tv

you envied the freedom, chained down by that ominous match tests, the letters and brackets of algebra closing you in,....

you'd rather run into the corn fields, the rough leaves abrasive in your young skin, chase the monsoon puddles deep inside the field, exploring the Amazons of your mind, and emerge out the other end, the tall stalks glistening in the sun now somehow more radiant after the clouds and the down pour

in your mind you are still galloping in your horse, in your mind, sometimes even propelled by the dramatic Bollywood tune that you had lifted from the movie of three weeks ago, you are alert for villians are bound to ambush you at precisely these times

one moment passes, as you walk

so passes another

and the bugs that bit you in the amazon jungle you were in, start itching and big spotches swell up in your arm, you are following the tykes of the 'hood faint suggestions are made of magazines with naked pictures, confusing you as you try to gather what it must mean...

but in the movies you see lots of side glances, and peeking from behind the trees, the spinnings and the twirlings....which is what ought to have happened after galloping in those horses...you look around

some ways down, in the gulley past down the bhattis, and sidewalk stalls and stores where portly sahujis measure wares in scales, you see some one, hair damped, and t-shirt wet, her arms flailing making the bangles dance up and down, as you follow the line, you see the frayed denim, 'rafu'-patterned flowers in the back pockets tripping your mind, and as you notice her "bata chappals" are stuck in the mud, and she is struggling

this is very familiar you think

you want to go and help, but the tykes all break into laughter!
 
Posted on 05-04-07 3:38 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?    
 

You'd think, he'd rescue Her, but no, he pushes her aside gently, into the bubbling slime, bends over and with much ado, rescues the chappals, triumphantly handing them over for safekeeping--broken phitas an' all! You'd think he's capsized the boat, but no, he hijacked the thread, hook, line and sinker and took a willing captive. And the the tykes break into, "Rocky mera naam, Rocky mera naam!"

Hehe! It's been a pleasure, sire!
 
Posted on 05-04-07 3:39 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?    
 

SITARA,
and
John Galt.

Read them - you won't be disappointed.

***
Oh look who's up there! :-0
Long time no see - the elusive one!
 
Posted on 05-04-07 3:42 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?    
 

errr i said tv, the whole point was no tv, hmm me needs some tumba

very pleasurable indeed sitara
 
Posted on 05-04-07 4:14 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?    
 

Oh My good lord, Lahure ji!

Looooong time! Today's been an exceptionally pleasant Friday (allergies and sneezes not counting), I got to glimpse/read Svengali--one of the most elusive and gifted writers of Sajha. And I don't jest!

It seems the Queen's given you some time off while she visits our esteemed land. Were you discharged or did you gracefully back out of her royal entourage? ;)

Svengali, don't respond please--go have your tumba! No saunis, only babes serving you as they jiggle their cup cakes at you, "will that be all sir?" ;)

The tykes heard "Rocky Mera Naam" on the radio hau!
 
Posted on 05-07-07 8:18 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
Login in to Rate this Post:     0       ?    
 

.

Sitaraji - Hello. The moon was definitely hiding behind those dark clouds huh? Wish you all the best for the married life and have anything, stories perhaps, to share with us? :-)

svengali - This very article is worth of praise and your 'Another fiction' was equally captivating.

Lahureji - What's going on in your neck of hood? Golfing, global trotting, fine dining? Hehehe. Hope all is well with you.
 



PAGE: <<  1 2  
Please Log in! to be able to reply! If you don't have a login, please register here.

YOU CAN ALSO



IN ORDER TO POST!




Within last 365 days
Recommended Popular Threads Controvertial Threads
श्राद्द
TPS Re-registration
सेक्सी कविता - पार्ट २
What are your first memories of when Nepal Television Began?
TPS Re-registration case still pending ..
पुलिसनी संग - आज शनिवार - अन्तिम भाग
निगुरो थाहा छ ??
ChatSansar.com Naya Nepal Chat
Lets play Antakshari...........
What Happened to Dual Citizenship Bill
Basnet or Basnyat ??
Sajha has turned into MAGATs nest
NRN card pros and cons?
मेरो अम्रिका यात्रा -२
Do nepalese really need TPS?
कता जादै छ नेपाली समाज ??
susta manasthiti lai ke bhanchan english ma?
कृष्ण नै अन्तिम सत्य
पुलिसनी संग - आज शुक्रवार - भाग २
मन भित्र को पत्रै पत्र!
Nas and The Bokas: Coming to a Night Club near you
Mr. Dipak Gyawali-ji Talk is Cheap. US sends $ 200 million to Nepal every year.
Harvard Nepali Students Association Blame Israel for hamas terrorist attacks
TPS Update : Jajarkot earthquake
is Rato Bangala school cheating?
NOTE: The opinions here represent the opinions of the individual posters, and not of Sajha.com. It is not possible for sajha.com to monitor all the postings, since sajha.com merely seeks to provide a cyber location for discussing ideas and concerns related to Nepal and the Nepalis. Please send an email to admin@sajha.com using a valid email address if you want any posting to be considered for deletion. Your request will be handled on a one to one basis. Sajha.com is a service please don't abuse it. - Thanks.

Sajha.com Privacy Policy

Like us in Facebook!

↑ Back to Top
free counters