Already on crutches how many more pieces would you break me into?
Already bruised by the nature’s call how much more pain would you put me through?
I have seen the rise I have seen the fall still we lived as one
I gave you a name I gave you my care
But you treat me as a cake, one for everyone to share
You are choking me now; it’s hard for me to breathe
I dreamed of us but ended up a victim of your greed
The “me” has strangled the “we”
And it’s hard to let go free
Lets switch places live me for a while
I am sick of living in denial
Don’t cut my wings I want to fly
Don’t rip my heart
I don’t want to die

Hami lai pahadiya bhanchau, "bhoto vs daura" ani "kalo topi vs dhaka topi", u have any idea mr @king ??? You wear our dress because u are ashamed of ur dress. ani aafno jaat prati ko prem ko khokro Dhwas ladaunchau ? tehi pahadiya aayera KING bhayera timi haaru mathi tetro raaj Garyo, u still feeling nostalgic about king ?? Wah all jyapus will be proud of you.

@ bairaghi, ever heard of free verse? Want poems with rhymes?try Dr Seuss books . It has pictures too! Kaanthey laandey !

Wats ur surname ? If u don't mind. If A single non-jyapu tells me this is a good poem, I will accept it. Otherwise everybody is being a racist here. Racism ko meaning arko jaat lai hepnu matrai hoina affnai jaat ko lai andho support garnu pani ho. THATS THE POINT I M TRYING TO GET ACROSS HERE.

Mr Bairagi,"Welcome to America" The self appointed welcome ambassador ? lol !!

@bathroomcoffee prove me u r not a jyaapu, I will recant everything I said.

आफु जस्तै खाते भएपनि रेसिस्तहरु घृणा लाग्छ जस्तो यो मुजी खाते बैरागी | खाते बैरागिलाई के सारो बैराग लागेको होला | त मुजी महा रेसिस्त रन्डीको छोरा होस् साले खाते |

@bairaghi

"If A single non-jyapu tells me this is a good poem, I will accept it. Otherwise everybody is being a racist here. Racism ko meaning arko jaat lai hepnu matrai hoina affnai jaat ko lai andho support garnu pani ho. THATS THE POINT I M TRYING TO GET ACROSS HERE. "

My ethnic background is different from @Prajwal Tuladhar's. I LIKE his poem and I absolutely respect the sentiments he is trying to get across.

Bairagi,"@bathroomcoffee prove me u r not a jyaapu, I will recant everything I said."

@bathroomcoffee just tell me if u r a jyaapu or not. End of story.

Just forget abt racism here. Ask any of your gora friends ( they don't know shit abt this jyaapu, madhesi, pahade thing !!!) how "when a mother cries" sounds for a poem title ? They will laugh at you.

No, I am not Jyapu. I am Madhesi Jesus, ROFL !!! Is this the end of your story ? ha ha ha petai dukhyo..

And I forgive you for your ignorance my son... aaahhh ha ha ha ha ha

Madhesi is not a bad word. I don't understand why u jyapus are so ashamed of your identity and get mad when someone calls you JYAPPU.

Bairaghi what caste are you if you are not too shy or scared to say it?

Shah

Thakuri shah, not madhesi shah

If you were a true shah you would have more class than what you have shown here :)

@fantush We want all prajas to live in harmony, not fight eachother. Our great great prithvi Narayan made a mistake when he created the caste system, but it was the need of time. Now there is no need for caste system, then why so much fighting ? Take it as identity or leave it. If you are real proud jyaapu at heart and its identity matters to u, u should feel proud when someone calls you JYAPPU. If u don't believe in caste system, just ignore it. If you guys are not jyapus then what u call urself ? GOPALS ???

@bairaghi

Go back and read this thread again. You are the one who introduced caste system to this thread. You seem like a big HYPOCRITE to me.

I think it's u who is not reading right. I just said jyapu and whole samudaye is here. When we were in school, everybody called everybody name. Nobody minded when I called them jyaapu. Now whole nepal is debating about madhesi ( they are people from terai ). If u hate word jyapu so much, why do u guys then use words like pahade, madhesi, bhoto ?? Who is being hypocrite here ?