wow

A very good read.......

NICE ONE dem smooth n carved with the heavenly words
loping it myan.......
I consider you as FIT n FINE too LOL....
nice weeken.....

Finally got to read it. I must say it is a very well written piece. The title, plot and ending all come together very well. Liked the style, tone and tenor you used in the story.

Best wishes.

John,

You report the crime on your own court and you sentence yourself to the pang of remorse to suffer all your life. What imperfection would it bring to her creation if she grants foresight to the good souls ? Is it lot to ask? Bless you.

John,
Nice story! awesome narration!

John, sad ain't it? But then we humans are never perfect.

very nice. These days whenever I check sajha I look for your piece. Great work keep writing.

On an even bigger picture....I think it's awesome that us Nepalis have some within our circle who have such amazing skills.

There's you john and Sum Off with exceptional writing skills.

Then there's a financial post started by Eminitrader- a guy with brilliant trading skills and I'm a regular contributor to his thread.

And I'm sure there are others involved in other fields who have a lot of contribution to make. I wish our leaders back home saw this. Maybe they'd feel ashamed at not building the proper infrastructure to lure budding talent to help the dormant, yet even more powerful force- which is sadly currently ploughing and fetching water all day long.

Keep it up John. Every time I read your stories, the more I learn about human nature.
Thank You!

Good one!! I really enjoyed reading it.. Ohh Poor Maya!!:-(

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Emotive words coalesced into an unfortunate turn of events in the story. Couldnt be any better than this, Galt!

Jhon Galt, I would say - Sir- John .

Wau ! you could be the inspirations of those writers who inspires others. You deserve a - salute-

We will be enjoying your future creation - article or the stories.

-BD