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 eyy ni lai lai ...........eyy lai lai hehe haha!!! ni laii laiii PART 2.......!!!

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Posted on 11-03-08 8:49 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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THANKS to all the ppl who read my other thread... and gave comments and suggestions.....!!!I had posted this in my other thread but just wanted to create a new one .....!!!

This  goes out to SONA1, Spoken, Maaiya, _____, MCMXC, Maddog, Girly GirL, Grunge83, Nepali Nari jyu ....!!!!!

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mero sathi ko twakey bau

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part -I

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It's always 12:00 am midnight . Kamal Bahadur Thapa is not home. He always come home drunk and quite late. Muna Thapa who is Kamal Bahadur's wife is always worried about her husband drinking habit. She never sleeps on time . She waits till her husband is home.Sometime she doesn't sleep as her husband don't arrive home. Kamal Bahadur and Muna Thapa got just one offspring from their 25 years long relationship. Sita Thapa who is my friend is the only daughter of in the Thapa family. Sita is not 19 years old.

 

Sita is my friend who goes to school and comes frm school back home with me. We are really close friends. We study in the same school and in the same class. Sita is really good student . I am just average in studies. But I am better at extra- cirricular activities.

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THE FIGHT NIGHT

One day I had to go to school all alone by myself. I waited for Sita to come to the chautarii where I used to wait for her to come and we would go to school together. Well I waited for her for more than half and hour. There were students passing by me and they were asking meh if I am going to school or not? I would just ignore their question and not listen to them. I waited but then I knew that I was going to be late for my school. So, I thought of heading to school. I had to walk about 1 kilometers of distance all by myself as all the students goes to school using the same way that I use might have been to school already. I knew that I would be late for the school assembly. I just walked lazily. Luckily I got to school before the first period started.

The day went quite boring. I was all alone the whole day. I had no concentration in class. I got quite a few nice comments from the teachers. The school was over finally. I had a long breathe to take after the school was over for that day. I went home and had my khaja. After that I tried to call Sita. As I was curious why she wasn't present today. I called her but she never picked up her cell fone. Then I called her home number. But nobody received the fone. I tried many times . All my efforts to know what really happened to Sita was in vein. So, I decided to go to Sita's home and see her.

Sita's home is about 10 mins away frm my house. I had no problem walking 10 mins as I was worried about what happened to my friend. So, I rushed to Sita's home. I reached there within couple of minutes.

When I reached there. I saw Sita laying in the bed. I was surprised to see her on the bed . Moreover the main door of the house wasn't locked. It was just open. Anyone could enter the house and none would know it. I could see Sita trying to close her eyes and sleep .

As I saw her on the bed. I went nearby her . I wanted to know know why she wasn't present today in school. As I talked thing changed all of sudden.

Kavita- Sita what happened to you ? And why is the door open?

Sita- Well nothing I just had head ache, fever and minor body pain.But I am far better that I was this morning . [She replies meh back with smile in her face. To just pretend that she's fine.]

Kavita- [ I could see her feeling uncomfortable while she's sleeping and could see her breathing not in a normal way ] Well are you feel good . Yu seem to be finding hard to lay urself on the bed.

Sita- I am fine. Well I find it always hard to rest on this bed. This bed is little awkward and uneasy to rest on.Well that's why I am feeling uncomfortable. Yu don't have to worry I am fine.

Kavita- [ I could see a bandage on her forehead and arm.So, I was curious to know what happened actually] Hey, can you tell meh why you are wearing those bandage?

Sita- [ Replies to my question in rather awkward way. I could sense that she didn't want to say what happened actually] I ... fell off the chair last night. I was trying to fix the bulb of the varanda. At that time i tripped off the chair and i got hurt on my forehead and arm.

kavita- How are you feeling now ? Don't tell meh it doesn't hurt or don't act. Tell me the truth.

Sita- Well why would I lie to you. I am saying the fact . I am feeling better now. I think I will come to school after couple of days of leave. Well could you write a leave application and give it to the Principal frm my side Please!!!

Kavita- [ I couldn't say no coz she's my friend moreover she had injury on the right arm .She uses her right hand for everything mostly as she's right handed. So, didn't feel hesitated to say that I would help her.] yesh! Of course I'll write. Don't worry about it . You take care of ur health and eat on time and sleep on time. Well don't think about homework.

Sita- [ Replies with cheerful smile on her face.] Sure, I will .

Kavita- [ I was curious to know why she didn't pick up my fone call.So, asked her ]Well I called you several times but yu didn't receive my call? I guess you were sleeping at that time. [ All of sudden I give the questions answer myself.] Well don't worry you don't have to say why you didn't receive the fone call. I can understand. Yu are sick and have body ache . Yu should take rest. Now I'll go . I'll see you back in the school when you are 100% fit.

[ita just smiles back to meh and gives meh a gesture assuring that she'll be fine soon.]

It was already 7:00 pm and I had to rush back home coz I had to do alot of homeworks . And I had to help my mom in the kitchen. So I thought I should say goodbye.

Kavita-Hey don't think too much and don't get worried you'll be fine and where is Papa and mama. [ I couldn't stop asking coz I didn't see them around the house. And I am too talkative]

SIta- Well they went to the market to do some shopping. I guess they'll be around here around within half and hour.I just told them to leave the door open as I won't be able to go there and open the door.

Kavita- Well stop hiding things frm meh. Tell meh if anything happened with ur legs or not. [ I know it was stupid question to ask as she was sick and this is my stupid bad habit that I can't stop asking about things.]

Sita- [ She is not at all annoyed by all my question but just answers all my questions with patience and full of smile in her face. But she didn't question me any question not even a single] Well nothing has happened to my leg it's just due to the pain that I have on the back. I can't hold myself sometimes. So, it's better I leave it open. AM I right, kaviee ?

Kavita- Well yeah you are right but don't you fear to leave the door open?

[ I always make sure the door is close proper at home. So, had some unfamiliar expression on my face I guess that's why Sita's facial expression changed ]

Sita- Well I know it's scary but I am bold and strong enough to face the fear. And feel no pain when I have to face anything that comes as an obastacle in my life.

[ I could sense some kind of extra energy being stored within herself. I felt so good to see that in her.I was late so I decided to go home. And say goodbye ]

Kavita- Hey, it's been quite late , I have to go now. I was worried about you so much today. I now feel good coz you are feeling good. I'll see you soon in school. I'll be waiting for you. And I'll come to see you on weekends and other days if possible.

[ I waved my hand to her before leaving her house and said goodbyee. She too waved her hand as a gesture of goodbye. Then I came back out inside the house to say goodnight and sweet dreams.]

After leaving the house I could feel that my heart is heavier than it was the whole day. I could sense some kind of cold air going through my mind making meh feel cold with all that I am thinking. As I saw my close friend laying on the bed trying to rest but she wasn't able to do so. I kept on thinking what might have happened. I thought that she might have lied me. And also said to myself why would she lie.Why would she make a joke of the pain she is having righ now. I kept on thinking if she said the truth or not...!!! I was on my way home. It took 24 mins for meh to get home.

-to be continued.....!!!!

 

ROCKEND AKA rocks or rocky

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Posted on 11-24-08 5:59 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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sabai ko satru - ohh hehe!! SORRY for making you wait so long.. ajhaii kurna paryoo sabaiko satruu ji...!! anyways thanks for ur comment !!!

Nepali Nariii- hehe!!! Well thanks for ur comment..!!! well good drama from sita's side rey !!! Lemme try to bring the dramas..!! when the story keep on going on in the other parts..!!! you'll definitely see some goooooooood drama I guess hehe!!! THANKS again for ur comment..!!!

suspense is killing you rey aama ni malai testai ramro lagcha hehe!!!! NN jyuu...!!

Maggiee bro- Ohh..!! maggiee broo ma ahile aakhaash ma uuudii ra chu jasto lagyoo malai hehe!!! Serial herey jasto lagyoo rey..!!hehe!!! Well maggie broo yeha hindi serial jasto dherai death ra life hudena ani dheraii marriage hudena ni lai lai hehe!!! LU thankyou so much for ur COMMent maggiee broo.. !!!

I feel soo ke vaney word nai aayena ni lai lai.... once again thankyou maggie broo.. keep following the story...!!!

 

ROCKEND aka rocky or rocks...!!!


 
Posted on 11-25-08 7:38 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hey Rocky,
It is going great man, and u r  making it interesting. I was also thinking what happened? but then continued>.., eheheh, waiting for next episode.

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Posted on 11-25-08 8:37 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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lu mora rockend aka rock or rocky!:) kasto rahechha katha ta birbalko khhichadi jasto kaile pakne ho :D ......tara bistarai pakako khana mitho hunchha ni hai :D......part iv is basically of true friendship story bhannau parla hai ...the way you present its gr8..........aru ta ke bhanne i enjoyed it lot hai n waiting for another part

 
Posted on 11-25-08 9:14 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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OMMMMGGGG.....kati ramro katha ho..ma ta marrna aateni...

ma ta naya saajha ma...first time tapaikonai kaatha hereko..malai ta majja lagyo dherai nai..ramro cha ekdammm.aaba ta sajha aairanu parrcha.

waiting for next part.....


 
Posted on 11-25-08 7:34 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Its getting interesting and more intresting rocky broda!!!!!!!keep doing good job broda!!!!!!!!


 
Posted on 11-26-08 6:48 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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______ -  Thankyou so much for ur comment..!!! THankyou once again and keep waiting for next episode...!!

spoken - oYe ke vancha.. Biralo ko khichadii jasto rey!!! biralo ley pani khichadii khancha rah !! huh!! ANd thankyou thankyou for ur comment..!!!

KANchi Maya - oh first nai mero pareycha..!! marnu aatey ni rey  ...!!! khai testo marla jasto kehi choina jasto lagcha ni lai lai ..!! keep waiting..!! pratikchyaa ko faal meethoo hunzaa..!!

GRUNGE 83- HEY myaan..!! thankyou for ur comment..!!!

 

THANKS all for ur comment once more..!!!!

WISH every one happy  thanks giving day...!!! Happy holiday..!!!

I would like to thank everyone for reading my story..!! and thank every who posted comments in my thread... THANKYOU ALL...!!!

ROCKEND aka ROCKY or RoCKS..!!!


 
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well well well..!!!!

I am almost done with part V and I think I'll be posting part V tomorrow as far as I know....!!!!

Keep waiting...!!! till then GOODBYE and have fun...!!!!

pratichyaa ko faal methoo huncha...!!!

ROCKEND aka rocks or rocky...!!!


 
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ani  ke ta mora rocky biralo le khichhadi pakaunchha ani Birbal le musa samaunchha :P


 
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Eagerly waiting Bro......and thanks for the comment on my story....LOL it is fully fictional not a true event....but things like that do happen in Nepal these days bro......anyways where is your story.....??? See ya soon and tke care bro.
 
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thankyou so much for all the people who went through my thread... !!! and thanks alot for ur comments...!! Well I wanted to make this thing going on.. for quite a while.. but I am sorry I think this might be the last part of the story..!!! HOpe you all will enzoie!!! IF you are disappointed with meh I am sorry to disappoint you all....!!! I didn't want to do it . But time change and ppl change so I had to..!!!

HERE IS THE LAST PART OF MERO SATHI KO TWAKEY BAU...!!! i KNOW IT WON'T BE A COMPLETE STORY AT ALL.. BUT STILL TRY TO SMILE...!!!

 

 

Part V

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36 yrs ago......!!!

It's rainy season.The weater is romantic but also he hated it as he's just a kid. He always hated dangling thing on his hands. That's why I guess he hated carring umbrella. He's a boy who is just 12 yrs old but yet everyone envy him. He's adorable and everyone is attracted by his innocent face. The school is over and he's on his way home.On his way home it started to drizzle. As he didn't have umbrella with him. He started to run so that he would be able to reach home as soon as possible before it rains cats and dogs. He runs looking at people staring at him. He finds everyone with umbrella or raincoat to protect themselves from being wet. He hated raning season as he's always wet home and always used to get scolding of him mother. As he's running he slipped and fell to the ground.

Immediately he's helped by someone nearby. He can't believe that he's helped to stand on his feets by a girl who is same to his age. But he feels greatful to the girl.

With some smile in his face he says," Thankyou!!!" And again he's ready to run. But he can't. He again tries to run but he finds himself being hold by something. He thought for while and looked back. He could see the girl smiling at him coz he's not able to move. The girl then asks him," Well you want to get sick or not ?" He replies," NO!!!"  Then the girl replies," Okey! Then I'll drop you off to ur home." He replies,"Well how did you know that I'll get sick if I run/walk in the rain." The girl replies," My mom told me that if I walk in the rain I'll be sick."

He never heard from his mother that he would be sick. Well they are on the way home sharing one umbrella. Their shoes are wet. He then says," I haven't heard my mom saying to me that I would be sick if I'll walk in the rain." With smile the girl asks," Well which way  is the one that leads to ur home?"

He used to be shy infront of girls but he don't know why he was shy. But he was surprised to himself that he was sharing an umbrella with a girl. And is talking with a girl who is really preety than the girls of his class. He then looks at the girl for while. And stares at her for a while. The girl again asks the boy,"Hey, which way is ur home? Huh? And pokes the little innocent boy's on his left cheek. The boys didn't utter any word of pain but feels his left cheek. Then the girls start to walk as she didn't get any answer. The boy was very quick to reply to the girls action. "Hey you'll be responsible if I am sick. And you are going the right way, could you wait I am comming? The girl replies," No, I can't wait. If you want the shade of the umbrella from the rain then run.I saw you running a while ago before I helped you to stand up." The girl giggles. She tries not to laugh but she can't stop from laughing.It again started to rain heavily. It was little calm for a while. Then the boy had no option than to run and catch the girl to share the umbrella with her.

The girl then smiles seeing the boy run to her to share the umbrella. The boy also smiles back to the girl. But the boy don't know why he's smiling. He's just replying back the smile I guess.

Now it's time for the boy to say goodbye. They are now  no far away from the boy's house. Then the boys disturbs the silence,"Thankyou so much. Well from tomorow I'll carry my own umbrella with me." Then the girl replies,"If you forget to bring ur umbrella then remember me." The girl smiles.

Then the boy asks,"Hey what's ur name?" The girl replies,"Pratima gurung" The boy then says,"Nice name, I am kamal." "Pratima this is my home now I have to go. See you tomorrow." Pratima then holds Kamal's hand and stops him. Kamal asks, "Anything wrong?" Pratima replies, " NO" then give a gentle kiss on Kamal's cheek. Kamal is confused and don't know what to do. He felt the gentle touch of the sweet lips of Muna.

It was his first kiss of his life and he was confused and dumb. Pratima waved her hands to say goodbye with gesture. Kamal with strange expression in his face waves his hand back.

Then Kamal shares his experience of the first kiss of his life with his mom. His mom says, "When someone kisses you on ur cheek and forehead, it means the person cares about you." Kamal replies, "Are you sure." Kamal's mom replies back,"Yesh! that's why I always kiss you before you wake up and after you go to sleep on ur forehead."

Kamal feel kind of unusual feeling on his cheek. He keeps on feeling if there is something on his cheek or not. He keeps on feeling his cheek while he's eating , doing his homework. Then all of sudden at around 8:00 Pm after having dinner Kamal goes to his mom's room and kisses her. "I came to kiss you because I care about you. And mom is it true that when someone walks in the rain he/she'll be sick?" Kamal's mom replies," Yes! But you always throw the umbrella before you go to school.ANd thankyou for ur sweet and lovely kiss." Kamal goes to sleep saying goobye for the old day.

to be continued.............!!!

this is it.. I am not going to continue anymore.....!!!!

I know the story is not complete...!! to make you all feel it's complete I am gonna give every details of the characters.. !!!

what happens to pratima and kamal?

THis is the last and the first meeting of kamal and pratima. Kamal never was able to meet pratima again. He then onwards never forgot to take his umbrella. Kamal always used to remember Pratima when it always rained.

what happened to Pratima?

Pratima was hospitalized. She was in hospital for 3 years struggling to get a new life. Pratima died in hospital struggling with her life to survive. She got anemia and the other disease was related to brain. He lost her meomory. Kamal saw the dead body of Pratima and was shocked to hear her death when he was in grade 9.

What happened next...?

kamal passed his SLC in first division and went to college. He fell in love with a girl named Srijana Shrestha while he was doing his ISC first year. THey had a sweet and lovely love life going on...!!!

How long did the love last...?

It was a long long love story.. They both loved each other more than themselves. IT's said that every good things come to an end. In the same way there was a full stop for the beautiful blooming love story . Srijana died at the age of 26. The doctor told that she is suffering from  a disease that they weren't able to find out. Before her death Srijana was half paralized for about 6 months. ONly her left part of the body would move. Doctors told Kamal that that was the other effect of the main disese that they weren't able to find. Doctors even told that Pratima would be toally palarized and wouldn't be able to to anything by herself. Kamal became an alcholic after the death of his better half" Srijana Shrestha"

what happened next...?

Kamal's parents talked with Kamal and they told they would support him in anyway they could to start a new life. He give him alot suggestion and finally Kamal's parents were able to bring Kamal back on the track they wanted.kamal then wanted to start a new life again. He wanted to make her girl Srijana happy in the heaven. He married to a girl named Muna Thapa. Muna reminded Kamal of his first innocent love of his life" Muna Gurung". Life went on well with Kamal and with time Kamal got changed.

What was the next drama...??

Kamal got new job and he had a new wife "Muna Thapa". Muna would remind Kamal of his first love story of his life " Muna Gurung". Kamal had new friends and he changed with time as every normal people. He now had a circle of people who loved gambling and drinking. Kamal's never everyday schedule was get together in his friends house drink and gamble. Kamal's wife gave birth to a baby girl. Kamal became a father at the age of 29.

what happened to the new baby girl...?

She went to a nearby school. She was talented and was my best friend. SHe grew up and started to learn many things. She came to be known of his father activities. Sita was phychologically effected girl. She used to tell meh she always had nightmares while she's sleeping.

What really happened to Sita... how did she got hurt...??

Kamal doesn't work but his wife Muna works in an office and runs the family. Kamal has been looking for job  but he didn't find any. He became frustated and started to again be an alcholic. "Fight night" remember the first chapter.. That night. Muna was trying to avoid herself from being hurt by ruthless Kamal Bahadur who had no heart what so eva. And was trying to grab the gold necklace that Muna was wearing. Muna didn't want to give him her necklace  that why there was a fight going on. Sita wanted to save her mom from her mean stone hearted father. Sita pushed his father so that he wouldn't be able to hit her mom. Then Muna told Sita to go to her room. But Sita didn't want to go coz her father would do anything at anytime. Kamal as he stood on his feet  and had a wooden stick on his hand. Sita was infront of her mom.  Kamal had no feeling to his lil girl and her mom. He started to him them with the stick that he was holding on his hand. Muna tried to save her lil gurl from being hurt but all her effort was in vain. She finally was able to get something to hit the monstor Kamal. Kamal fell to the groung unconscious. Muna called the police and told every single detail. And took Sita to the hospital.

 

why did I cry....??

I came to know that my friend Sita has been getting therapy from the doctor 2 times a month since  she was 10 yrs old.ANd she told me that doctor told her to write diary coz it would help her alot. And I came to know that the diaries were a part of the therapy. All the details she told meh about the fight night was horrible and scary.

Where am I now...??

I was in United States now I am back in nepal to publish my book. " My father villain" It's related to the life of my friend Sita.

What happened to the diary that I took away from Sita's library..??

I finally got chance to read it after 6 yrs. I read it on the way to Nepal in the plane. Every single thing mentioned on the diary were sad . There was nothing happy that I would be able to mention out here. Every single page were full of tears. The diary only consisted of 2 yrs of her life from 17-19 yrs. I asked Sita if she still writes diary or not ? I was glad she did mention my name in her diary.

what was the reply...??

SHe told me she burned few of the diaries she wrote in the past on her last b'day.

what happened to Sita's Mom..??

Muna now take cares of her lovely sweet girl who is on the bed forever. Muna is working in an organization and works in a bank too. Muna kicked her husband Kamal from his house.

what did kamal d0 later...??

Kamal became a beggar.. He begged for money on the street. And with the money he got he drinks alcohol. kamal died on the road when a car hit him. Kamal was drinking totally drunk and was walking on the middle of the street making it hard for the people to drive.

 

want to know about me ..??

I went to US after my +2. I am now an engineer. I am married now.....!!

 

I still know the story is incomplete...!!! I want you all to fill the gap urself where ever you find it incomplete..!! thankyu..!!!

THis may be my last meeting with all in sajha ...!!!

THankyou all for ur support..!!!

If you find any mistake you may keep it with you .... THankyou...!!! -XD

The End...!!!!!!!!

 

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Posted on 12-03-08 1:51 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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oye mora rocky...... lau ja 5 wata partko lagi 5 wata......mero comment ni incomplete lau ja and every represents one comment itself....banki kura afai bujhne lau ja


 
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sorry SPOKEN..!!! and I am extremly sorry to all the readers...!!!

I dunno what went wrong inside myself that made meh be so rude to myself..!!!

spoken timro 5 wata ko meaning thaha pauna dherai kossiissh garey ani last ma I got just one meaning of all..!!! hehe!!

MAggiee broo thanks for ur comment... well I just posted my part V and Later I found that yu had sent meh the comment.. Well Well SORRY I couldn't continue any more of it maggiee broo..!!!!!

ROCKENd aka rocks and rocky..!!!


 
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 "THis may be my last meeting with all in sajha ...!!!"

who are you kidding rockend aka rocks or rocky I know  you’ll be back fo sho

and thanks for the story u make me wanna write one too

NNjyu: me not so "arramai" been busy with school works a lot..oh how i wish i didn't slack off last couple of years..on top of that it's really heart breaking to know what norbeta is going thru..oh well i guess that's what u get for sleeping around too much and not wearing U-KNOW-WHAT

oh and that SAT was such a P in the A..i took mine a while ago..i think i failed it tho..i'll be  needing some alahamoras and wingardium leviosaaas along with flipindos and rictasempras if i have any chance of getting into U-KNOW-WHAT





 
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Muiii CHUiii- I like to call yu this way...!!! find it clumsy so, or I might call you CHuii CHuiii...!! LOL!!

well well well Yu going to write one story.. !! Oh I am waiting ...!! I'll read but I won't comment hehe!!!  silent reader huney pura.. mastii huncha hola... I guess..!! ALL the best for ur story... N rocky or rocks is waiting and looking forward to read ur story..!!!!

 

well Yu are so sure that I'll be back...!!! LEt's see who wins...!!!

 

ROCKENd aka rocky or rocks..!!!

 


 
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oi rocky bro kasto ending gareko yo!!!!!bhayena ni !!!!!

 
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Dear Rocky bro....

sad to say I only managed to read this now... so late.... I loved every bit of it... good dosti between Sita and urself (friendship last forever hoina ta) .... sad for Sita and Muna some things are just so unexpected and yet when u see everything going smoothly life ma kahile kai k na k ta huncha.... Love the short parts u wrote... hope u study well and wish u very best for every step you take towards success....

Cheers

NN

PS... to MCF jyu... sad about Norbeta i know she is naughty little devil... i might not be able to take care of her for long... caz might be shifting soon from beloved dracula land ... unless u wanna take my position hehehe... As for ur SAT i know its a P in A... but its all for future... hope u did well... la take care and hope to catch up with ya soon!!!! Later.


 
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Rockend,

            It was a good story and it touched my heart. You told us about a typical Nepali household story where domestic violence is very common. Even if you go to the police station with minor domestic violence case, they would say “Logne Swasne Ko Jagada Paral Ko Aago, Milera Aaihalchan In Deu Char Din ma.” It’s really sad. Hope this thing would change in our so called Naya Nepal.


 
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Hey...!!! Hey...!!!

Grunge83- Thankyou so muchaaa for ur comment...!! I could see you didn't like the way I ended the story.. I know it's incomplete hehe!!!

Nepali Narii diju- Hey thanks for ur sweet comment..!!! WEll yestai cha life..!! we don't know what's comming next..!!!! Dee wanted to write all the parts But I just changed my mind hehe!! HOpe I'll be able to come up with some new Story in the future..!!!

Bhakte- Thanks for the comment..!!  yeah domestic violence is not good..!! and BROKen HOMES are bad..!!

ROCKEND aka rocky or rocks..!!!


 
Posted on 12-06-08 6:04 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Ha ha Rocky depicted real incidents happening in our society . I have seen such incidents in my hometown.

Nice Try Rocky.  

R that engineer??????? LOl rocky

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Posted on 12-07-08 3:10 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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sabaiko satru..!!!- THanks for ur commentoo..!!! Hmm ... well it happens.. and is happening.... and will happen !!! I mean these kinds of broken homes and domestic violence thing..!!

R that engineer rey...!! ke vaneyko tyo vaniko..!! BHUJinoo maile..!!!

ROCKEND aka rocky or rocks..!!


 



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